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Sir, Looks great, especially considering the time frame that you had to put it together. One typo change: on page 7 change "The result threat" to "The resulting threat" > Subject: RE: Wuterich update > Date: Wed, 25 May 2011 12:01:07 -0400 > From: kirk.sripinyo@navy.mil > To: Dwight.Sullivan@pentagon.af.mil; DHSULLIVAN@aol.com; neal@puckettfaraj.com > CC: babu_kaza@hotmail.com; haytham@puckettfaraj.com; meridith.marshall@usmc.mil > > Shouldn't be a problem, but it depends on when we get all the edits in. I'm gonna look at it now, make suggestions, then I have a moot for Nash from 1300-1430. If we have a final after that we should be good to go. > > v/r > Sip > > -----Original Message----- > From: Sullivan, Dwight H CIV USAF AFLOA/JAJA [mailto:Dwight.Sullivan@pentagon.af.mil] > Sent: Wednesday, May 25, 2011 11:40 > To: DHSULLIVAN@aol.com; neal@puckettfaraj.com > Cc: babu_kaza@hotmail.com; haytham@puckettfaraj.com; meridith.marshall@usmc.mil; Sripinyo, Kirk Major NAMARA, CODE 45 > Subject: RE: Wuterich update > > It ain't elegant, but here's a draft that incorporates Maj Sip's outstanding edits. > > Haytham & Meredith, can you please review the highlighted section and let us know if the dates are right. > > Maj Sip, think we can get it filed today? > > Semper Fi, > DHS > > Dwight H. Sullivan > Senior Appellate Defense Counsel > Air Force Appellate Defense Division > (AFLOA/JAJA) > 1500 West Perimeter Road, Suite 1100 > Joint Base Andrews, MD 20762 > 240-612-4773 > DSN: 612-4773 > Fax: 240-612-5818 > > > -----Original Message----- > From: DHSULLIVAN@aol.com [mailto:DHSULLIVAN@aol.com] > Sent: Wednesday, May 25, 2011 1:05 AM > To: neal@puckettfaraj.com; Sullivan, Dwight H CIV USAF AFLOA/JAJA > Cc: babu_kaza@hotmail.com; haytham@puckettfaraj.com; meridith.marshall@usmc.mil; kirk.sripinyo@navy.mil > Subject: Re: Wuterich update > > I'm way past the point of diminishing returns for the night, so I'm going to pack it in and finish this tomorrow. > > I'm attaching a very, very rough draft of the first 21 pages (ignore anything past page 21). Please don't feel a need to review this working draft, but also feel free to do so and provide revisions if you wish. But I'll be circulating another draft on Wednesday. > > Semper Fi, > DHS |